The story sounds interesting so far. It kind of reminds me of 'Dragonswood' by Janet Lee Cary. If you haven't heard of it or read it, then I suggest you should its really good. Anyway the story sound fantastic, but there are some grammar mistakes that I think you can fix in no time. I really like the story and can't wait to see what else is next. Please keep me posted whenever you plan to update :)
Blackbird
By: Nikkie Youngblood
Kaaya is a sixteen-year-old girl, who gets caught trying to look over the obsidian wall, that has fascinated her since she was a little girl. Then she gets a chance to fight alongside the Black City's infamous freedom-fighters.
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Light_Ark
thanks! i think i have read that book or at least my sister has. :) i'm not really good at writing and coming up with good ideas my sister has helped me so far. ill try to update whenever i can :)
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