Diving Above

By:
cole888
User: cole888
Diving Above
Hey, this is just a preivew of my new book Diving Above. It probably wont make sense so far but once i post it all you'll get it. one hint though . they liv underground. The girl in the picture is blidge she is a very important character. ENJOY!

  • Adventure
  • 719 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 444
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 05-16-2012
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genh888tzu
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genh888tzu

you might want to find a subtle way to explain the flashbacks beforehand. perhaps start with something current, and then head to a flashback? just a suggestion. otherwise, an enjoyable read!

zeldafox
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zeldafox

soooo lucky you have like ur scenes perfectly like done! i'm always so horrible on what to do at fighting scenes. LUVVVVVV ITTTT! poor tirie :[[[ wanna cry
ps: OMG I LUVVVVV IT!!!!!!!

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