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Quite good, lol, i thought Malaysia is a country.

The other comments are correct. With some touch-ups, this story could be very good. The premise is good enough for a vote. You have my vote.
Augustus.

Good writing. As tina2010 mentioned, correct the typos and you will be good to go. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Your title is quite interesting, and it has a nice twist at the end. Your book cover suggests mystery in the story. But try to edit some typo errors in your e-book. You still have a lot of time to review it. If you do, you’re good to go because you have a good story plot. You have the potential to become a good writer. I hope this helps you. Good luck!