BookRix

You write a lot like I do. Very creative! While I'd thought of using zpegs' as some sort of detainment device, I didn't even think about full on prison cells. Good concept! And I should have read 'Pearl Shaped Prison' before writing mine!

It is Lily ^^ sorry, I've been in the swing of my main novel and wasn't used to writing other female names, thanks for reading ^^

a forward thrust to it, I wanted more! Very good writing - want to read more from your pen, pencil, or type pad!

Good stuff...lol
My kind of story. Is the officer's name Lily or Violet?

Well done