Finding Myself Again

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robbedbygreed

Wow. I absolutely love this story. Ah! It's wonderful! Bravo on that. Bravo!

However, you have way too many grammar mistakes. Your spelling is off, as well as your punctuation and syntax. You have too many run-on sentences, and that really confused me. It was a bit messy.

I'd encourage you to find a family member or a teacher who will help you really learn the art of writing. Because you have potential. I don't think I could... Show more

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