Wow!! I really liked it!
I went off Harry Potter about a year ago because of the sheer fact it was almost the baby food of books and there were few back stories.
But a reeeeeeally liked yours!!
There were a few tiny mistakes but only little things like missing a letter or mixing up two letters.
A really good read.
I look forward to reading more.
(Ow, my fingers a sore from typing)
The Elementals
A Harry Potter Fan Fiction By: Namacub95
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