Please update this book I want to know what happens please. I love reading this book.
You've made a good start on what I think is going to be a good read! I particularly liked that you had character building and images at the beginning - it was a nice touch. My only advice is that you try paraphrasing and breaking what you've already written down into smaller paragraphs. It will just make it easier for the reader to keep track that way :) Other than that though, keep up the good work and good luck writing a... Show more
i love your idea, and i love the way you set it out by showing the pics and info at the beginning and then went in to the story.
but a few things you can improve on is that start your writing not exactly below the chapter title but leave some space. and the book isn't in chapters. it's hard to read and it looks like a big block which could put some people off reading it.
other than that wicked book love every word please let... Show more
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