The Life Of Sophie in the underworld

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The Life Of Sophie in the underworld
Sophie is a 17 year old girl who went through a lot during her childhood now she meets her real parents and her mate What will happen next? will she survive the drama?

  • Romance
  • 2 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 582
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  • Publication Date: 10-31-2012
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i agree with t.b the text is WAY too small.

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No puncuation, no paragraphs, the text is so small and I think for flash fiction, this is a bit long.

Lots of words crammed together, scare a reader. Try to paragraph it and use commas more.

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