I love this story a lot! It's wonderfully well writen.
Barry,
This is a scary and well put together story.
Excellent writing!
This book is scary good! It's worthy of every vote in the Drabbles contest.
Well done!
Cheers,
Mitch
This is great, it caught me the moment I started reading, please let me know when you have more written in it!!! :D
You really know what you are doing:) Wonderful Job!
I could not ever imagine seeing disabled children dying in a crash. It really would rip my heart out to see that many disabled poeple die at once, or any people for that matter.
I cry every year when the 9/11 tragedy is mentioned on the news, It breaks my heart to see people hurt or for them to die. That is the main part that caught my attention, because I help with disabled people at my school.
That my friend, was brilliant. You should think about expanding that into an actual book.
