What a great story. No wonder it won a competition. Well done.
This had some beautiful moments of despair. You have the ability to make your reader really invested in your characters.
The end was a great surprise but I'm not a romantic so I have a hard time believing that love can concure all. :)
a very good strt, loved the way u made him sound so confused n really poured out the feelings.i would love 2 read more, so keep me updated
It's so amazing to get notes like these.
Can I beg you to look in on another little story (if you haven't already)?
It's here:
http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-n-barry-carver-resolution
Comments & hearts are always welcome.
THANKS again!
Shocking ending too. Wasn't expecting that. I must say, I am amazed at the quality in the pages of this book. Great descriptions, great story. Amazing job on this Barry. Extremely well written. Makes me want to read a sequel... Are you writing another? If not, do you have any other short books of yours that you would reccommend?
God Bless.
God speed in your recovery.
~Jazz
Beautiful. Well done. ALways a brilliant tale now taken from anothers view. Wonderful.
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