Important Post
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Important Post
Well, MysteryWriter1, what you got here is hot! Needs a lot of editing (I'll write you about that) but the action is a continuous fast paced whirl. As eroticism goes, it is top notch but I'm not so sure about the vampire/werewolf part. I don't quite see how Jordan fits into that world. You said she was a fifth element but gave no further explanation. What does that really mean? If you don't spell it out for the readers, how... Show more