BookRix

Please update I love this book

Like your book very much please update fast i can't wait long.

oh i like it.. please update soon..

awwww i love it

Veru interesting,waiting to see what happens next :) update soon

I really like it! Update??? LOL :)

wow just noticed i have already read this book but forgot to favorite it, i love the concept and plot of it the characters sound good so far the only feedback i would give it WRITE MORE!!!!!!
IsaBaby <3

Like the new chapter but its a tease please let me know when theres more cant wait to see how Jake explains himself

Wow! I haven't really ever liked books with "mates" and things, but this is really well written. The only thing I would say is that you need to work on capitalization. In a lot of the sentences, the name "Ash" is not capitalized. It is a proper noun, so it needs to be capitalized.
You also need to work on punctuation. There are some spots where you need to put a comma or a period. For instance. on the second page: "Now what should your name be?" I thought a moment. <----- this need to be where you add a period. And then on the third page at the end of the chapter, it says: "Alright let's get home before Laney starts to worry." You need to put a comma after "Alright."
Thanks, and I really can't wait for you to add to this. Keep me posted!!!!!!!!!!!
Eva

Great job loved chapter 3 :) can't wait for the next chapter !