BookRix

Forget, forgot, forgotten..., three breathless words!
yours Victoria Vanderbilt

Art is beautiful when you create it from a heart as beautiful as your's. Keep writing amazing books, I believe in you.

nice book

wow holy shiz ur good update

It's going really good! please update soon.

I think it's really good so far and has an amazing amount of potential. I get what you meant about the repetition. The level of feeling that goes with it is amazing and very skillfully done. I look forward to reading the rest of it.

Good beginning. Yet you need to fix errors...some spelling, but mostly letters in wrong orders. ..like woudl instead of would. and others.
Also you repeat a lot. Many sentences start with 'she'. Also there's one paragraph that 6 sentences begin with 'maybe', and 4 with 'always'.
Apart from those, the story has great potential...you need to continue.