I enjoyed the free verse :) Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner
I really enjoyed the imagery and the raw emotion of the poem. I wonder what it would sound like if it was done as a spoken word poem.
That's what it was intended for. All my poems are meant for spoken word. thanks so much for your feedback!
<3 beautiful
Brilliant, but very poignant:(. This poem is extremely moving. So sad that they had to leave the world to find relief. No-one should have to feel like that.
Again, i think i should mention this piece of writing is amazing. I look forward to reading more of your work. :-)
Thanks so much! Believe it or not, I wrote it in two minutes... I was in a rush haha but I was really happy that it came out good! It means so much that you check it out and liked it!
Two minutes? Holy smokes. That's talented.
I didn't really put much effort into it, but am very happy you liked it!
Thanks! Also, that was fine, I haven't even been on in weeks.