It is a very good beginning good job.
I have updated .....please do check
i am about to read it
the update was really good i don't really much more to say. keep writing and have fun:) sorry for not being much help.
This was a great beginning, and giving a human feeling to the issue of being a werewolf. Although you should do some editing, you have many misspelled words and some that should be in capital letters. I would love to read more, so continue with your writing.
oh...thank you for pointing out my mistakes , il try to correct it in my next update.....il continue to write more..thanks for ur support.....:)
It's a good beginning , want to know more love it
thank you...sure ill update soon...friend me to get msg about updates..