I get the plot but the grammar is so bad that I couldn't go further after reading the blurb. However with work, this could be a good book.
The main character seems too trusting to me, such people do exist in the world and I believe that this book could benefit such people so work on it.
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Do you know anyone who is fluent in both your native language and English? You need someone who can speak and write in both language in order to fix this.
Very little of either the blurb or the book itself is comprehensible. Your sentences make no sense whatsoever in English, making it impossible to read. Which is a shame, since from what little I could understand, this looks like it could be an interesting and helpful... Show more
it is good for new hope and new life.the life may be expected that it will stopped according to lose our love or getting shock accident.it will be completed and we will try to get happy in it.
It's a Picasso-eque type of story.
thanks
Could't have said it better myself, Laz.
yes and what can i do? i have three books at amazon .let me see or talk to my self .if we cooperate as i send you a work and you review and publish as two authorities me and you and we can share or agree to percentage of benefits if it will be sold
Unfortunately, I am soo swamped with school work and some other projects, but I'm sure if you join the group, Better Writers, you could get help from people who are far more experienced than I am.