Please revise before continuing and please correct parts....like when it says that Darien said blah blah but he wasn't even there.....please revise before continuing.
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the math of fantasy
Such bad spelling errors.....now is not know.....you basically keep saying " the ball is know" where it is " the ball is now"
I really luv this book!!!! Please finish the next 1!!! Cant wait !!!!!!!
I think that you mean stared when you type starred. Just a little tip. Amazing book and keep writing!!*v*