Very interesting and well written. Definitely sticking in reader's mind for a long time...lol Excellent!
I think it is a very interesting romantic-philosophical short story in Chekhov`s style. But with a thin coating of erotic...
So nicely told and, as short stories should be, with an excellent twist in the tail. Loved it.
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mirandabm
Thank you for the nice comment Brian. Definitely a twist in the tail!
Interesting story, Miranda--great sense of place!
Thanks for the nice comment Manjit. Yes, there's certainly an unexpected twist in the tail. As there is in your :D parrot story. I loved it!