BookRix

I Loved this book it was like u were there in the story with them

I was interested in the main plot of the story, but your continued to confuse me at some points. I couldn't tell in some parts if they character of the story was talking or not. I found it quite interesting, however the flow of the story was... a bit bumpy.

I'm sorry but I couldn't read the whole book, I honestly do like it if it were my opinion but some parts were cut short. The story seemed to be moving a little too fast for me, throwing me off occasionally.

All in all you may need to reread your book for riddled errors. Although some parts may have thrown me off I found your book interesting and different than other vampire books that I've read which caught my attention.

I hope you write more books, you have an interesting imagination. :)

Thats a beautiful book :)

I like the plot. However, I feel that in certain places the story moves too fast and the flow is not so good.

I have to admit that when Dragomir asked to see Valentina before the duel I was expecting some evil plot. But it was OK in the end.

You should try too edit the spelling errors when you have time. It a bit hard to read in some places. I found it a bit odd that vampires believe in God but if they can shine in the sun they can believe in God too.

And then the pictures. I f you are going to make Antoine-Kaname hotter than Cornelius maybe you should switch husbands.( I'm joking. But Antoine does look better than Cornelius).

And one last thing: congratulations for the patience and determination you proved by finishing this book. I'll soon read you'r other books. Write new ones until I finish them.

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I loved the end of the book. I do hope you write another. You do have some miss-spelled words, but none that are that noticeable. I liked how it ended, and the wedding scene was lovely. Amazing job! Loved the pictures too! >_

No, but I will add two new chapters: one with Valentina and Cornelius's wedding and second how their lives are after that.

OMG!!! I Loved the ending!!!!!!!!!!! That Dragomir got what he deserved. Will there be a second book?

Loved the update! I cant wait for the duel scene. Please write more soon!

please add more !

Love the update!!!! I want more! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I can't wait to see what happens!