LOVE this story. The metaphors and depth of it are amazing. You are a very talented author.
I am speechless as to what to say. This book was creative, amazingly written, and full of talent. Please continue to write. I love your style. This captivated me. Thank you so much for sharing this glory.
You’ve written a romantic prose; the words you used were expressive of the narrator’s affection. Your style of using futuristic dates was good. But I think you have one typo error in page 4 – should be “and” and not “an” (. . . one hundred and thirty years ago.) Just for your review. My overall rating – you have an excellent story concept and style of writing. Awesome!
Miguel,
Everything that I wanted to say has already been said. Original and from the heart. The star I'm about give you I've named Olivia. I've also given you my vote
