Juliette

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mimzy101
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Juliette

Juliette is an 18 year old girl who wishes to make some friends and start a new life by going away to college. After an extreme workout with her body over the summer, she is beginning to love herself more. She is also ready to experience love and happiness. Will she find love? Will she make discover new friendships?

 

**Unfinished. My first time writing a story and putting it up. Sorry for the bad grammar in advance. Any tips or suggestions is greatly appreciated.**


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Dave
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Dave

I've sent you a message concerning the assessment of your book. I hope you find it helpful and I will check back with you off and on. Best of luck with it and thanks for sharing.

Toby Wright
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Toby Wright

Hey I like this . Some grammatical errors . But not too many . You're very good with words

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mimzy101
mimzy101

Thanks for reading!! I will be working on the errors soon! Will be adding new chapters too! :)

Toby Wright
Toby Wright

Nice

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Fhem18 Butterfly
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Fhem18 Butterfly

I like the story and what happens now or after their encounter inside the gym?

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mimzy101
mimzy101

I wrote a new Chapter. Hope you like the route the story is taking. <3

Fhem18 Butterfly
Fhem18 Butterfly

Thank you so much and I will read the new chapter now.

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Deleted User

Really good, I love it! :)

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mimzy101
mimzy101

I'm glad you loved it. I just wrote another chapter. Check it out. <3

Matilda flavia
Matilda flavia

Checked it out thou it was too short can't wait for more...

Deleted User

I will :)

cool_blue
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cool_blue

plz write more
i want to see were this goes

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mimzy101
mimzy101

Wow! You liked it so far? I did write more and my computer crashed. But I will try to remember what I wrote and put it on here as soon as possible. :)

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