You have a wonderful storyline, but the story its self moves entirely too fast. There needs to be more details and more of a plot. Unfortunately there are many grammatical errors. Other than that I love this book. Each character has definit personalities. The story its self actually dragged me in making me feel something.
i like the first idea.. :D i think her and the 'bitch' should fight.. :) i love fighting sorry... Bentley.. no just no... i hate him to much >_>
thanks soo mucha nd sorry it went fast but i will def try to update give me some ideas on what i shld do shld there me a bitch who thinks she should be sebastians? or just make bentley come back and try to win her over while his friend who he cheated with moves in on sebastian? give me ideas
it wwas great awesome plot .... but it kind of went very fast....... also i would love for you to continue it is great! Stupid Bently ungrateful little bastered. email me when you update!
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