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I like the book but some of the sentences and punctuation didn't make sense. You needed more description. If you work on your spelling and make your sentences make sense it would be even better. However i loved the book and the story line. Thanks for writing it.

i love this book it is awesome thank u for making it

Good job!

I like it but if you could describe it more and you could have the sentences make sense. Keep writing. Good luck.

i give u credit for writing this book and posting it but it was very run on sentences. Go slower describe more make us see the story like u see it. Good luck with your next book.