Drabble Competition

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Drabble Competition
just my entry for the drabble competition, read within for beautiful dipictions of death and destruction. it will contain tales that are not for the faint of heart, alls hoping i can win :p

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RebeckDawn

i really like each of your stories - they are all different, and yet all well written and interesting. you have a strong voice and create clear pictures for such short stories.

I found a couple small problems that you might want to edit though :)
Hunter:
"metallic" shouldn't be capitalized
The last sentence should be "to be found they wouldn't" instead of "the wouldn't".
Flight:
You have a typo that says "used in emergencies, as I... Show more

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