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These poems contain wonderful images of winter and other seasons. Grammatical errors such as comma placement, spelling and spacing don't remove too much from these beautiful words.

From page one I knew that you had the poetic style that I enjoy reading. Rhyming poetry has it's place - but it's in the prose and Haiku that you measure a poet's ability to connect their emotions to their pen and write honestly and completely.

You are a gifted writer and the Haiku really wrapped it up for me. I enjoy experimenting in different forms of Haiku and I read it with my fingers to make sure that the syllables are correct - your Haiku was flawless!!

God Bless and thank you for sharing,

Tyrone

thank you for reading
It was special for my son to point out the sunset and to experience it with him.

Thank you for participating in our
poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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I especially loved 'Humbling Sun of Winter' and the references to your son. Very well done. God Bless and good luck.

Very Well Written!