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A tale I enjoyed reading and probably inspirational to you in the writing.I like the introduction of poems,to sooth the savage breast . Well done you've arrived at a family story. Mine own one is 'Adios' if you care to read. Funny thing I've been asked to write about m childhood by a film director. So far I've kept clear but now I'm wondering. If you hadn't written our story it would all be lost to the world.
Good luck and you have my vote.
Well done with just one spelling error but not overpowering your story. You got me to think. In this way your message succeeded. That alone,was what made this a winner./Joe Vote given