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Well, one thing I notice right away is that you say her dad is lying on the bed caughing. The word cough, is spelled like cough. Just a minor edit, and more can be made. There are also certain parts that seem random, like the part where you mention that she skipped a grade. Another thing-as a direct quote from the text, it says, "Hey kid, what's your name little boy?" This is being said to the main character, which I thought... Show more
Awhh! Oh my gosh! You're such a help!!! Thank you so much!! Also, they call her a little boy because they're making her feel bad telling her she looks like a boy. Anyway, thanks so much!!
Sure! If you want more feedback, just tell me.
Please! I would really appreciate it!
BTW, you are SUCH a good writer. This book is astounding.
Awhhhhh thank you so much!!!
Hmm...interesting. This needs a lot of work to fill the loop holes but so far so good.
So the lead is in a phase of her life where she just wants a boyfriend and all the guys she's interested in are either taken or mean? Hmm...
Yeah, basically. So that means they're "Just Friends" but I'm still working on it, so more will come soon :)
Yay
Wow Madison... and you say you CAN'T WRITE?! who do you think your kidding!? YOU CAN WRITE! and GUESS WHAT?! you write well!! like SUPER WELL!!! pleasepleasepleaseplease update?!?!?!?!
Thank you soooo much! I really appreciate comments like this!! I'll update soon! I update a lot so, I'll let you know when I do :)
YAY! thankyou!!
I am looking forward to reading more of this story, Madison. I hope you continue to develop it over the Easter holidays.
Thank you :) Just to let you know, it's updated! If you would like to continue reading.
i like this book so far, when is the next time u think you'll be updating??
thnx! I update when I have free time. Most of the time, I add a couple sentences, on the weekend I add a lot because I have a lot of time.
ok thanks for telling me i can't wait to read more :)
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Updated :)
I like this book so far. The humour at the end, priceless! I think I'll try it sometime. :)
:) same xD
I'm sorry it's so late, I took a break from BookRix for awhile.
Understandable, now I'll get back to reading your book...
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