hey crysal if thas your name ho old are you i will tell you my REAL age if youtell me yours
hey crysal if thas your name ho old are you i will tell you my REAL age if youtell me yours
You also keep the reader guessing just enough to make reading more a given.
A quick note - you tend to jump tenses from past perfect to present, which makes it a little bumpy to read. An easy fix, though, and since this is a work in progress, I'm sure you're aware of the occasional glitch.
Having said that, though, I'm already drawn to your characters, and the story itself is sweet, slightly mysterious, and very interesting. I... Show more
Yupp, thanks a million and its g rated for now because there might be some intimate seens later on. If you know what I mean?
omg keep writing i love this so far.
please, cheal out the book 50 shades of blue its about a girl named bub who knows what to do with her life but her parents disagree and then school drama and fiughting and then she has an older sister named faith who her parents never talk about faith seems so nice on the phone... Show more
please, cheal out the book 50 shades of blue its about a girl named bub who knows what to do with her life but her parents disagree and then school drama and fiughting and then she has an older sister named faith who her parents never talk about faith seems so nice on the phone but not so much in pearson and thats not why her parents never talk about faith theres a reason a reason that when you hear your jaw will drop and then my sires genorations the first book will come out in erly augest
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