The Mind of "M"

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User: merlin05
The Mind of "M"
The dark art of invoking thought. For some, reality isn't the conscious, but maybe it lies within the inner thoughts that so many are scared to explore.

Keywords: 
dark, poetry, dreams, anger, love, delusional
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writingmum

This is excellent work. You're a real thinker, Merlin and a passionate one. That comes across in your writing every time.
I really love this book, which is primarily an account of what goes on in that head of yours. It's very sincere, personal and touching, so you get my vote.
Good luck
Wendy

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merlin05

It means a lot to have someone acknowledge your work. I know I won't ever be a "great writer", but with compliments like this....from such a great writer like you, means so much. Thank you.

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merlin05

I have this weird obsession with sad or demented clowns. I searched for hours trying to find the perfect picture...and this one kind of spoke to me! I think it's fitting because that's what i feel like...a misunderstood clown who is running out of time.

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stouttr74

I loved your poems. It would be hard for alot of people too let others see whats going on in their mind. I think you are very brave too let others know, I would be kind of chickened out too let others know whats going on in my mind. The clown on the cover of your book is that just a picture of choice or was it the closest you could fine too how your feeling inside yourself??

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merlin05

it means alot to have you guys see my very soul in what i write!!

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cavlaster

Wow! I was moved. I could see the pain, anger and frustration. It reminded me of a fellow published author and friend of mine Nomar Knight. I think you would find his short story in the Playing With Fire Anthology to your liking. I gave you my vote because I believe not only did you write this with deep feeling but you portrayed your emotions in a beautiful poetic prose which holds your readers attention. Keep up the great... Show more

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merlin05

Thank you so much for taking the time! It's all i could ask for! again...thank you!

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merlin05

This is the most honest i have ever been. this is literally my private thoughts and journal for everyone to read.

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yezall

Real or imagined the words are powerful. If this is what feeling you hoped to evoke, then I will say good job.

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merlin05

Thank you....I'm Speechless.

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