loved it. I wish there was more though... is this story finnished or are you still writing it? I would love to read more. It had me 'LOL'ing at my desk at work... people here are looking at me like am a loon now thanks to you and your book :)
Excellent! I loved the misadventures that began the tale and how you seamlessly morph into the pith of the story. It's very different, and has lots of promise.
This was really good. It feels so real. Like it happens to the everyday Joe. I like your style of realism. Poor Abraham, but that's what he gets for creating an alter ego who's beautiful hahaha. Keep it up!
Blessings
Meli
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It's finished now! LOL. I have been off for a couple of years and I started another book. I hope you are doing well.