There's a lot here. I've begun reading, and you have some serious talent for poetry. Striking images and exceptional word choices. Nice, nice work.
Thanks so much! Feel free to give any feedback on it... constructive criticism is always needed too!
I wish that I had the "technical"ability to crit poetry...alas, I don't. But, if the words and images strike me as really good, I at least want to let that be known. Keep on writing:)
Well, I appreciate it! I know some of them don't really make sense... but it's all just a way to vent or release vibes/feelings I get from people...
please update
i love this book but id love it even more if you would update it and mabye even add it too my favriots
Thanks, I do have some more I haven't added to it yet. It's really a collection of stuff from the past couple years. When you click on the book, before you open the page to read it, there should be a button on the right-hand side that you can click (has a small heart and is... Show more
please cheak out the book 50 sheades of blue
Thanks! I appreciate it.. I'll take all criticism too. I know some of the poems may not make sense.. they were more a way to vent.
Oh, no, I understand perfectly. I have some poetry on my page if you would like to check it out, that's fine.
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