2033 (discontinued)

The Hellhole By:
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User: tronytroo
2033 (discontinued)

Mitchel, Alex, and Jeremy must fight through one bloody battle just to make it worse. Will they be able to infiltrate the worlds worst terrorist organization, or will they end up under six feet of bloody dirt.


Keywords: 
Military, Fiction, Teen, Gore
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Deleted User

First of all...where is chapter two?...You skipped from chapter one to chapter three haha...second of all, I agree that longer chapters would suit well, as well as maybe a longer prologue...I love the idea though...I think this could become an amazing book. :)

~Jocelyn

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Deleted User

Yay!

tronytroo
tronytroo

Also I have an account on https://www.fanfiction.net Lt. Barnes is my username. I am writing stories on there as well.

Deleted User

Sweeeeeetttt.
I will check it out. :)

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Deleted User

I suggest longer chapters. I like this idea, and with longer chapters, a clearer introduction and a clearer plot will make this an amazing story to read.
~Fudge

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tronytroo
tronytroo

thank you. I will look into it : )

Deleted User

No problem at all. My only wish is to make people happy.
~Fudge

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