The Ring

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User: lizzy21
The Ring
My entry for the BookRix Drabble Contest.

They've been together for years. He wants to make it official. She wants to end it.

One story, two lives, three perspectives.

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angamonkey

I had to come back and read this again, It was beautifully written and I never expected it to take the turn that it did. I hope you post up more work soon.
-Angely

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felixthecat

It is very difficult to write a Drabble; more difficult still to create a truly 1st rate piece, limited as we are to 100 words, and having to tell a stand-alone story.
You have done it three times,Lizzy. I am totally in awe of these three interconnected stories. Dare I say perfection? Yes.
How could I not give you a vote?

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lizzy21

i promised myself not to check my book comments for a month, but i couldn't wait anymore. thank you all for your positivity! i really appreciate the encouragement. more than you know <3

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gooduklady

Those were three really well written drabbles, all connecting, all powerful. You have an excellent way with words and I was wanting more...then realized you were limited to only 100 words per piece.

I am very impressed and look forward to seeing much more from you in the future.

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sereni

I really enjoyed you three stories you made me feel his disappointment and broken heart.

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Kalai

You have brought out very well the emotions of the male character. A broken heart with pain.

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