BookRix

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Nice start

this could be the start of a new series, but it still needs some work. Don;t give up.

hey um... u need to finish this sound like a great book

omg that book was so boring i have my friend here and she read it to and said the same thing it was really boring
is that even a book???
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chris

No offense, but I think Richelle Mead had something different in mind, I like the start though. It could use some editing too.