This was a refreshingly original spin on an age-old fairy tale, and I must say it had me hooked from start to finish. You have a remarkable way with description; I had such a vivid image in my mind because of it, from her green wedding dress to the gnarled, arthritic woman she became.
There were, however, a few little spelling hiccups (like confusing alter and altar) but it wasn't anything major. Also, you might want to read... Show more
P.S It was a shame that your story came to a halt on p12 :( i wanted to keep reading about Alina, does she have her own story? If she does i will be the 1st reader!
hello, i really love beauty and the beast stories and your story gives me a whole new vision, as soon as read the first few pages i was sucked into your masterpiece, great job! I hope you continue writing other books 2 :)