MONEY CAN"T BUY A GOOD FIRST IMPRESSION.
Seventeen-year-old Caymen Meyers learned early that the rich are not to be trusted. And after years of studying them from behind the cash register of her mom's porcelain-doll shop, she has seen nothing to prove otherwise. Enter Xander Spence---he's tall, handsome, and oozing rich. Despite his charming ways and the fact that he seems to be one of ther first people who actually gets her, she's smart enough to know his interest won't last. Because if there's one thing she's learned from her mother's warnings, it's that the rich have a short attention span. But just when Xander's loyalty and attractiveness are about to convince Caymen that being rich isn't a character flaw, she finds out htat money is a much bigger part of their relationship than she'd ever realized. With So many obstacles standing in their wa, can she close the distance between them?
I like your style of writing!Second when she is thinking something instead of saying it don't put ".It will confuse your reading of what she's actually saying.Plus a view errors but in creative mode it doesn't really matter right now.You can always go back and edit.Keep writing I like this!
