BookRix

Truly a lovely fantasy, wonderful descriptive words.Serena

I remember you showing me this a short while ago and I was quite stunned at the beauty of both the idea and the way it was written. That first time I felt it was sad that the two ended up apart but reading it gain I realise that this is the whole beauty of the piece. Many people meet and fall in love but there is something quite unique about that moment when you first realise they have that power over you and vice versa. It is a magic that if unbroken stays in the memory for years to come or is later worn away by the complacency of becoming just another ordinary couple in love.
Maybe I haven't interpreted it right, but that was the feelings it stirred in me.

All I can say is that I am filled with envy at your ability to make music out of words. Absolutely stunning work.

Another awesome story. I really admire the vividness of your descriptions and the poetic feel in your narration. I would have opted a happier ending, but this is very beautiful nonetheless.

Thanks for another great read.