Every Rose

(Has its Thorn) By:
Every Rose
Star crossed lovers in a modern world. When no one really understands them there is only one way out.

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judycolella

This is truly a unique take on the old story, and as such is most definitely a tragic and sad story. Your idea is wonderful, and if you do a little editing (like correcting "tested" to read "texted") it will be a little less confusing and disjointed in places. Other than those few easy fixes, however, you have crafted a modern tragedy that tugs nicely at the heartstrings. And personally, I think you deserve a vote, so here it is. :)

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