Stolen Heart

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Stolen Heart

A place where you have to marry at 16 ½. A young age yes, but they need to grow the population because of the bombing that happened. The explosion that killed 5 bilion and changing the nation.

 

Rose is 16 and her Mom to find her a man to marry.

 

When things go wrong Rose is forced to go to school. Then she meets a boy who threatens to steal her heart. But her Mom still is on the hunt for the perfect man for her. Thinking she has the perfect one picked out, but how will she get them closer together? And when she does will Rose have a choice who steals her heart?  

 

Will she break her heart or there’s?



 

***** Not finished******


  • Romance
  • 13731 Words
  • Ages 12 and up
  • 580
  • 1
  • Publication Date: 11-25-2017
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mulalo
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mulalo

Luvly story hope you wil finish it though i really enjoyed it

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lilly
lilly

Thanks for the kind words.
I'm going to try to work on it soon.
---lilly

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felixthecat
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felixthecat

Hey Lilly, you write so, so well. I'm intrigued by the direction you plan to take in the writing. Your character seems perfect at this beginning stage, too. I'll continue reading. Great job. Oh, on page 1, at the end of the second paragraph...think about changing "to" to "too" :)

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lilly
lilly

I love that, amazing

you are a inspiring person

felixthecat
felixthecat

:)

You are a fine writer. Keep moving forward, even if you have to stop for a minute and take a breath.

lilly
lilly

=)
thanks
i'll try

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Deleted User

This is the book you told me about!!!
I am so freaking excited to read it!! <3 XD

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lilly
lilly

tell me what you think

Deleted User

I will...once I get a little further XD I'm reading while doing laundry XD

lilly
lilly

=) thanks

Deleted User

Of course :)

lilly
lilly

=)

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