A Miner's Life in 15 Words

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A Miner's Life in 15 Words
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  • Drama
  • 17 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
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  • Publication Date: 10-25-2011
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barrycarver
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barrycarver

The weight of this is in the clarity of its rush of words and the hardness of its conclusion.

Nicely tied head-to-toe.

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writingmum
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writingmum

This is great, but without reading the title, there is no object in the actual sentence. Can you get 'Miner' in there somewhere, I wonder?
Wendyxxx

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lazarus67
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lazarus67

My dad was a miner. Died of 'blacklung'.

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lazarus67
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lazarus67

My dad was a miner. Died of 'blacklung'.
Sorry, double clicked. You can erase.

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Carol Wills
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Carol Wills

Love your entry Leslie, it's very clever.

Just a heads up,the link in the contest seems to be broken...had to go to your profile page to find it.

Carol x

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