Shadows

Are You Pure? By:
Shadows
Tsuki seems like your everyday girl but she's been running from something NO-one can escape, her shadow.
Tsuki isn't 'Pure' but for some reason she can already see her shadow. She doesn't know who this strange, dark, dopple-ganger of hers is and doesn't want to understand. But it leads her to meet Akako. A boy her age with a bad mouth, but maybe he's not as bad as everyone makes him out to be?

  • Fantasy
  • 742 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 604
  • 7
  • Publication Date: 10-27-2010
Keywords: 
Shadows, pure, tsuki, akako
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joeparente
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joeparente

I just read your short story. I thought it was a great start to a teen novel that might sell! You will need to write more but there are some spelling errors.(JUST a FEW)
Keep it up and write some more./joeparente

PS: Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a comment, also for your friendship.

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shadowofdawn
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shadowofdawn

but I've had writers block for, like, ever! I really like the idea too :), so I'm sorry if i take long on writing but I am working on it okaii?
I'm glad you like it :) thank you!! XD
Luls xx
~ShadowofDawn~

fullmoon0
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fullmoon0

this book is really good write some more please i think its really good and i write alot

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