I enjoyed part 1 because the characters are good, and the story has good explaining of the weapons, the vampires, how the vampires disappear....
I recommend part 1 for ages 10 and upwards.
I am now going to read part 2 and I will let you all know my comments on that in the part 2 comment section.
Excellent work, from iamhalo
Other than a few grammer mistakes i love the book.
cool...thats awesome.to bad tim is a backstaBBING FRIEND
thanxs im still trying to write the 4th one still lol
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