BookRix

Thank you so much of adding this story. I love it. I had to say it was surprising. Poor Tim. Love the sense of humor... Wonderful yet again.

Another great one, Laz! Laughed all the way through and for different reasons every few lines. Loved the ending!

Looks like we share the same sense of humour... slightly twisted with a sprinkling of profanity. Great story and a fun read. Thanks.

hahaha! Loved it. You got the "scream" just right!

I really needed a good laugh right now - subject just right. thanks

Was scared out of his wits lol. Great story =) I really enjoyed it.

lol nice, love it.. was so funny ... anther good book ..

melrose

That was funny at the end! I really liked this story. The name on the tombstone was genius, I really liked the idea there. Another great job! I just love your writing.

Thats a great short story but i would like to see more that is very interesting. Could you write a whole book about it please? :)

Short story to short cut way ,pretty good work.