I like this one. Short enough for me to have time to read. I am glad I took the time to read it. I did notice a few punctuation errors, but other than that, it was amazing all around. The ending makes me look for a sequel.
What a little gem this is. When things were going so bad I use to imagine a porthole that you are describing here. Very descriptive and although short in length it is long in my memory! Thank you and look forward to reading more of your works!
This short story is a perfect example of "dynamite comes in small packages", because this certainly blew me away! :)
Oh if such a porthole ever were to be, I would jump right in!! A sweet and touching story. I love the fact that I am left to engage all kinds of endings.
Saving my last vote of the day for my dear friend, and wonderful romantic, Laz.
Here ya go babeeee.
Keep the mystery in it. No need to change- that is what makes it my number 1 pick.