Can't believe I didn't see this one. So short yet so powerful. I really wish it was longer though, yet the ending and introduction are amazing the way they are.
So, I prayed for a miracle, and what did I get, a John who loves to bite. He paid extra and smiled. He told me, "That was more than a love bite."
I just smiled my usual "it's okay" smile and helped straighten his tie. I hid the cash with the rest of the nights takings and hit the sack.
I rose, feeling unusually fresh and energetic, I glanced in the bathroom mirror on my way to the toilet. I braked to a stop and took another... Show more
Whoa Cauldar, My, but did you get a shot of "Clive Barker"? Interesting your take on this....you have my blessing to continue this melodramatic tale.
Laz
You always write the best stuff. Will there be more on this one?
one way i judge a book is if i get a mental movie of it playing in my head. most times it takes a few pages to start. and sometimes not at all.it happened right away for me on this on. you have a great gift with word. i loved it and i loved to cover to by the way