I think I have some very strong competetors in the Drabble competition! Well done, this was beautiful.
I read this before and I didn't know why I didn't leave a comment. Sorry, so here goes. It was beautiful and sad. I felt his desire to return to her. It left me wondering if only too. wonderful drabble.
You write these things with the same ache as a Chopin nocturne. Your phrases ebb and flow like sighs. I love the way you turn melancholy into spirit-breezes then pull the reader gently along on this ethereal stream. Gorgeous, Laz. And yes, mesmerizing. :}
Thanks Adlin. Kind of you.
You're welcome. I love everything I've read so far.
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