FLASH

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FLASH
A journey unrelated

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spirit.of.the.stars.

I thought these little stories or 'flashes' as you call them were interesting, thought-provoking, sorrowful and touching. The one about the abortion was really heart-wrenching as the baby is pondering his/her new life...then is promptly snuffed out, very sad. The one about the kittens was sad but with a happy ending as all the kittens were safely rescued. It makes one further believe in the unconditional love that animals... Show more

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evangheline

I absolutely loooooooooove this, I cannot express how beautiful you have written this, your words paint a wonderful picture and when I finished it left me breathless. You are a wonderful writer and trully hope you will continue. God bless you and it has been my honour to read.

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mysterywriter723

I really enjoyed all of the clever, little snippets you included in this volume. I am curious as to the inspiration for each one. I know one was based on a true story, the heroism of the mother kitten. Compelling and emotional, Laz. Heart-wrenching and poignant, as always.

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lazarus67

Thanks, I wanted it to be in the first person ( not my favorite ) It had to be, because it's about a continuous journey from mind to mind or situation, always as if it's happening at that very moment.

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rebekahjennings

Hi Laz,

I think you have a way with words, that's a definite. I am not sure the first person present tense works for me here. I think, perhaps past tense would work better.

It's great you keep churning stuff out. It's the best way to keep learning.

Bek :)

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gooduklady

A beautiful compilation of thoughts and ideas strung together like a rope of pearls. I enjoyed each and every one, sometimes re-reading them to make sure I understood exactly where you were going with them. I especially love your artwork and background pages. Well done, Laz.

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