BookRix

I inherited two kitties recently, so I can relate...now if my dog just doesn't eat them :)

Add another vote!

Why should the cat proudly place the rodent at Sally’s feet? Does it means that Sally’s family eats rodents for dinner?

Check this line- “I needed (to) execute a lovely flying leap…”

Gets my vote.

Came over to vote for this lovely story, that again caught me by surprise.
I Love your work, sir.
Thank you.
Glynis

Great story. A few typos and grammatical errors, but the story was good with an unexpected ending. Enjoyable!

How did you get the cat to write this story? They normally ignore what mere humans want them to do! Good descriptive story Laz.

Great story! Love the descriptions and of course, the ending.

As always a lovely story. The anticipation to see the poor victim pass by, the pain for a lost life and then to read the ending. Well done :).

I was not expecting the ending. It made me chuckle. You are an awesome writer. :)

Thanks...don't know why I did that.

A satisfying read.
More paragraph breaks, methinks.
xxx