Lazarus,
I love the cover and the story. It is beautiful and captivating.
Exceptional writing!
So good!!!! I was not expecting that! I knew she was a ghost or something else, but not his sister!! You must like this book!
I really liked the spider web visual. The ghost and the dream really took it to another world. Thanks, Lazarus
Like most stories this short its substance is limited by its size, but like usual you've defeated it by lacing it with the most vivid and fantastical imagery. If I had your talent my stories wouldn't be so technical and dry. They'd be truly amazing.
This was amazingly beautiful. I love how most of your stories have a poetic flow to them. It makes it feel as if I am reading myths and legends. The creative cover helps to add to this story's appeal as well :)