I enjoyed Remember Me...there are so many ways it can be interpreted. Perhaps once lovers, in another lifetime, will be something else, even if merely friends. Lovely, Laz
Some lovely poems here, I really thought the last one was bittersweet and kind of sad, but beautiful.
The Eden one was also interesting, I hadn't seen a poem like that before. Good job, well done.
Your writing is so eloquent and flowery. Yet, it is flowing with sincerity and oozing with charm. You have a way of looking at things in life that is breathtaking. Sometimes you present twist endings. You are a rare talent, Laz.
After reading ALL the FF books and Nightmare stories (so far), this was a wonderful change of pace! It reminds me of my hubby's poetry. :)
Bravo Laz. If I start heaping on words of praise, it will spoil what iI felt when reading your poems. Bravo again. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writings.
Jack
great poems :) i liked them all, but my faves would be the first one and the last though they're both the saddest ones :)
Thanks...That's what most people say...1st and last ...their favorites.
Laz
Thanks.